Apocalypse Pie Sisters

Vision: Not much to say, reflects show-like apparel. Expression and stance fits "character" of alternate future. Colors of the background play nicely with foreground.

Originality: Again, taken from the show, like it was meant to be, so nothing to help here. Picture overall isn't surprising, I could imagine other artists coming up with such composition of things, although overall I like how it turned out.

Technique: Proportions are consistent throughout the piece. Sketchy feel works great with character and lighting is laid out pretty good, although mane reflexes seem to be pretty random. Not much to argue about. (Maybe that shadow patch to the right from Maud.)

Impact: I like it. It gives feeling of that posed photo of soldiers just before the battle. Crosshatching adds nice roughness.

Notes: I see you took to heart my previous critique. (Or I'm being delusional.) Other than mane lighting nothing caught my eye, great job. You should try leaving comfort zone. Nobody says to abandon your style (it's great for the type of art you're doing), but maybe you will find something new.